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Students were allowed to have 104 words in their writing this week. Albert recently joined our Literacy class from the Intensive English program. I wanted to share his first 100 Word Challenge. He did an excellent job! Leave him a comment.
by Albert Jang
Jack was playing 'TF2' at his house. As he started they came in and trying to ruin his game, they were Jack's sister and her friends. He almost win that game, but suddenly they came in and turned off computer. So he started his game again. This time they didn't come in, so he played the longest game and they came in. They broke his keyboard. He changed his keyboard and started again. He won the trophy in game, so he bought a best armor in 'TF2'. He tried to save it, but they came in again and threw his computer.Finally Jack hit them